![]() ![]() "He did it again, and she moaned, again and again and again"īut aside from that, the the overall plot and characters did nothing for me. "She cried out again and again and again." Let me give a snippet of what the one and only love scene consisted of: The sad part was it didn't even read like a love scene, she glosses over entirely all the *crucial parts* just gave bits and pieces instead. The author dragged these two coming together throughout the story and had them make love as the final scene only for it to be glossed over in certain areas and just filled with fuzzy awkward fragmented dialogue. The love scene which is at the very end of the book was underwhelming and odd. ![]() In fact some of the odd proses made no sense to me. Lots of repetitive dialogue and weird choice of phrasing things. Typos especially, this was riddled with them to the point where I literally took a pencil and had to fix them myself because it got so distracting. I also kept finding a lot of grammar mistakes and typos. The writing in this was pretty poor and kind of stale to be honest. That gorgeous cover is the main reason I picked this book up but unfortunately the actual story did nothing to capture my interest. ![]()
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